As I walk past the park , I see this girl on a swing. She swings so high that she nearly fell off but she didn’t , she jumped off the swing and the swing was still going but she didn’t know that. She ran off to the shop and left the swing, swinging. When she went to the shop. The swing was still swinging and then this little baby walks past the swing and she gets. HIT!!!!!. Right out of nowhere but just in time I saved that little baby and then the little girl came back and she said sorry. I said what for. She said i’m sorry because I left the swing swinging and should of stopped it. I said that's ok. Brrrring. Oh I guess you have to go to school. The girl said yeah I will be here tomorrow morning playing on the playground. I said yeah I will see you tomorrow then. And then that's when the mum turned up to get her baby. So kid’s make sure you stop your swing after you jump off it because somethings like that could happen.
Hey, Darius I like you work. Did this happen in real life? But anyways I like that you left a little note at the end good job keep it up.
ReplyDeletevery creative with the girl on the swing in like that kinda first and third person thing you did like when you watched her jump of the swing in the story coola
ReplyDeleteHi Darius I like your work and how you set up your work.I like the little note that you put in the end, good job.
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